They started at dawn, when the valley was still asleep under a silver mist. The mountain rose ahead of them like a wall painted in snow and stone.
Katerina tightened the strap of her pack and glanced at the others. “Slow and steady. No hero runs. Mountains don’t care how strong you feel at the start.”
Mikhail laughed, stamping his boots. “It’s just a climb. We’ll be at the hut before noon.”
Her eyes narrowed. “The mountain decides the pace, not you.”
They began the ascent. The path wound upward in switchbacks, gravel crunching, air thinning with every step. At first, the forest guarded them—pines black against the morning sky. Then the trees thinned, twisted, and finally vanished, leaving only rock, snow patches, and the raw bite of wind.
By midmorning, clouds pressed lower, dragging their shadows across the ridge. The sun vanished as if swallowed whole.
“Looks fine,” Mikhail said, pulling his jacket tighter. “We’ll beat the storm.”
But Katerina stopped, planting her pole in the scree. “You don’t beat storms. You respect them. And this one’s moving faster than we are.”
The others shifted uneasily, glancing at the gray horizon. The mountain had grown silent—no birds, no insects, only the dry hiss of wind over stone.
It was not silence of peace. It was the silence before something breaks.
The first flakes came like whispers, soft against their jackets. Harmless at a glance.
But in minutes, the whispers grew teeth. Snow thickened, driven sideways by wind that clawed at their hoods. The trail blurred, then vanished.
“Keep moving!” Mikhail shouted, squinting into the white. “We’ll push through!”
Katerina grabbed his arm, yanking him to a stop. “No. This is how people disappear.”
The group huddled, backs to the wind. Snow stung their faces, filled their bootprints before they could look back. The world had shrunk to a circle of gray no wider than twenty paces.
Pavel, the youngest, trembled. “I can’t see the path. Which way now?”
Katerina forced calm into her voice. “Rule one—when visibility dies, you don’t chase the trail. You fix your position. Think. Stop. Observe. Plan.”
Mikhail cursed under his breath, but didn’t argue. The storm howled too fiercely for pride.
They crouched behind a boulder, the only anchor in the white void. Katerina unfolded the map, weighting it with her gloves. She traced with a trembling finger. “We were on the ridge, halfway to the hut. If we keep climbing blind, we risk the cornice. One step too far and the mountain will swallow us.”
“Then what?” Pavel’s voice cracked.
“Then we go down. Drop altitude until we’re below the storm line. Find shelter in the krummholz.” She met their eyes one by one. “Slow. Roped if we have to. The danger isn’t being slow. The danger is being fast in the wrong direction.”
The wind screamed, throwing snow into their faces, but the decision was made. They turned from the summit and began the slow descent, each step carved carefully into the white silence.
The descent was slow, every step deliberate. Snow hissed against their jackets, masking the crunch of boots on scree. The storm muffled the world until sound seemed swallowed whole.
Then came a noise that did not belong to the storm—
a deep crack, sharp as a rifle shot, echoing across the slope.
Katerina froze. “Rockfall,” she hissed.
The mountainside answered with a grinding roar. Stones, loosened by freeze and thaw, spilled down the slope. Pebbles first, hissing past their boots. Then boulders, thundering, tearing snow and scree in their wake.
“Down! Hug the ground!” Katerina shouted.
They pressed themselves against the cold earth, arms shielding heads. Rocks clattered around them, some bouncing harmlessly, others smashing so close the vibration shook their ribs.
When the last echoes faded, the storm reclaimed its dominance. The slope was scarred—fresh gouges in the snow, trails of rolling stones still settling.
Mikhail lifted his head, pale. “That… that was close.”
“Closer than you know,” Katerina said. Her eyes were hard. “Rule two—mountains throw stones when storms wake them. You stay out of gullies, hug ridgelines, and never stop under a cliff face. We were lucky.”
Pavel’s voice trembled. “So the mountain tries to kill us from above, too?”
“Not tries,” Katerina said. “It simply does. Our job is to listen before it speaks.”
The group rose slowly, shaken but intact. Ahead, the slope dipped toward twisted pines—shelter, if they could reach it. Behind them, the mountain loomed in white silence, indifferent as ever.
The twisted pines appeared like ghosts in the storm—low, gnarled, bent by decades of wind. Krummholz. A forest born of survival itself.
Katerina pushed into the thicket first, branches scraping her jacket. The trees tangled together so tightly that the wind could not tear through. Inside, the snow fell softer, muffled. It was not warmth, but it was shelter.
“Here,” she said, dropping her pack. “We dig in.”
With poles and gloved hands they scraped out a hollow, laying packs as a barrier against the ground. Pavel, shivering, collapsed into the space, pulling his hood low. His teeth chattered like stones.
“Eat,” Katerina ordered. “Even if you don’t feel hungry. Food is heat.”
They chewed frozen energy bars, hard as rocks but life-saving. Steam rose faintly from their breath, catching in the dim light.
Mikhail leaned against a crooked trunk, eyes lowered. “I thought speed was safety. Push through, reach the hut, get out of the storm…”
Katerina studied him. “Rule three—mountains punish speed without sense. Fast feet slide. Fast choices lead to cliffs. You can only be faster than yourself, never faster than the mountain.”
No one laughed at the lesson.
The hours crawled. The storm howled above, shaking the trees, but inside the krummholz it was bearable. They sat close, conserving warmth, listening to the mountain rage.
At some point Pavel whispered, “So we don’t fight the mountain?”
Katerina shook her head. “We respect it. Every rule we follow is not to win against it, but to be allowed to leave alive.”
And in that small pocket of twisted trees, with snow piling outside, the truth settled heavier than any silence.
By dawn, the storm had spent its fury. The world outside the krummholz lay buried, white dunes where the path had once been. The air was brittle-clear, every sound sharp as glass.
They climbed out stiffly, brushing snow from their gear. Breath steamed in the still morning as they started again, slow but steady, following the curve of the ridge.
Within two hours, the hut appeared: a dark shape against the snowfield, smoke rising weakly from its chimney. No palace, just four walls and a roof. But to them it was salvation.
Inside, boots thawed by the stove and fingers tingled painfully back to life. Mikhail sat in silence, staring at the flames. Finally, he said, “I thought the mountain was just stone. But it’s alive, isn’t it? Not kind. Not cruel. Just alive.”
Katerina sipped hot tea, her face drawn but calm. “The mountain doesn’t care if we live or die. That’s why we care for ourselves. That’s why there are rules.”
Pavel leaned closer to the stove, eyes wide. “Say them again.”
She raised a hand, ticking off slowly:
“One — respect storms. If you can’t see, you don’t climb.
Two — avoid gullies and cliffs. Rockfall and avalanches are faster than you.
Three — slow is safe. The mountain punishes hurry.
Four — eat and drink even when you’re tired. Cold takes strength first.
Five — never think you’re stronger than the mountain. At best, you’re tolerated.”
The stove popped, and the group sat in silence, each carrying the weight of the night.
When they looked out the window later, the peak shone under sunlight, glittering and clean, as if the storm had never happened. Beautiful. Indifferent. Eternal.
And they understood: survival in the mountains wasn’t about conquering the summit.
It was about knowing when to bow, when to turn, and when to let the white silence speak.
